Thriller Script

Script

Detective's Scenes

Detectives turn up at Shenfield cricket club in black fiesta.

They walk slowly towards the main entrance, where lawrence turns and scouts the surrounding area before entering.

Once the detectives are in the club, they walk slowly towards the corridor.

They then walk down the corridor single file.

Elliott: Boss

Elliott calls to Lawrence to show a chair with blood and petrol stains.

Lawrence then moves towards the blood stained sink where the antagonist's knife is laid upright soaked in blood.

Victims scenes

Flashback of Matthew pushing Charlotte through main entrance.

Matthew then leads Charlotte down the corridor very hastily and pushes her on to a chair.

Matthew then circles the victim with the knife intimidating her and showing his presence.

Matthew then pours petrol around Charlottes chair.

The thriller then ends with a close up on a secret note being burnt and dropped to the ground.

Elliott Joyner